Beautifully written. It seems like it could be considered a love poem almost as well...or at least that's how I interpret it, lol. Anyway, great job. I love how vivid the descriptions were. Keep writing! :-)

I love poems about nature. Too bad I'm not very good at writing them. Anyway, this is great!

wonderful i loved the hidden hints to Apollo and the fact you used her name Diana! a wonderfully sweet poem...you sounded like you were talking to a lover almost.

lovely, soft and quiet. just what i needed, thank you