Hey, I liked your poem. I've never really read anything like it. As for your review, yes, there's a possibilty that there could be something wrong with my religion, when people devote themselves to something like that they're always taking that chance of being wrong. As for people leaving the religion, they find more comfort and what they think is more proof in other religions or just the theory of evolution. The demise I was talking about was the governments intervention on Christianity. All of a sudden everything is acceptable but religious tolerance for christians. About God making these natural disasters...the only disaster mentioned in the Bible is with the flood and Noah's Ark. God promised His people that he would never flood the whole world again. The natural disasters are simply from weather patterns and our destruction of our environment.~Anyway, I read some of your other stuff, and it's very different from the things I usually read and very intriguing...deftly written. *hats off to you* :.)

very strong and i can relate to how it feels. very nice work...KW!~davida

Good imagary, thanks for the reveiw. A thank you will be posted on my next chapter of Twisted Memories, or I may write another chapter of My night Job? maybe don't know yet. I am guessing you liked the body suit under the kimono, I think I must've screwed up there. Thanks again and enjoyed the reveiw on Victim too. You where not the only one that had her heart start racing. I was home alone when I wrote this. Beleive me I kept jumping at every noise. Thanks agian and great peom.

~Vimpire~