Reviews for Waiting
lshta chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
the way you styled the poem made it easier to read and had more meaning as if it were two people speaking as one. great job!
UnfortunateFortunate chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Lol, love it! And it'd make for an awesome slash! P
Crimson Grave chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
wow you can really feel the pain and emotion you expienced through this poem. It creates such strong imitry and conveys such a strong emotins. Keep Writting!_!
i-wish-it-was-make-believe chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
sighs well i know all about watching some one walk away and never returning. well written, very emotional.