the way you styled the poem made it easier to read and had more meaning as if it were two people speaking as one. great job!

Lol, love it! And it'd make for an awesome slash! P

wow you can really feel the pain and emotion you expienced through this poem. It creates such strong imitry and conveys such a strong emotins. Keep Writting!_!

sighs well i know all about watching some one walk away and never returning. well written, very emotional.