|Reviews for The One I Loath|
| mindreader311 chapter 15 . 1/16/2011
ahahahahahaha i had a bf just like sam... lasted a week... good luck sophie ur gonna need it! i love the story so far cant wait to keep reading i just had to write this when i saw sam... hahahaha luv ur writing!
| little.artist chapter 18 . 1/10/2011
It's a cliche story. But I love cliche :) Love how it ended, but please, for your future stories, but a line or break in between different POVS! It gets really confusing and i read something, then realize its someone completely different :(
Good job overall! :D
| annne chapter 18 . 10/17/2009
I loved this story so much. you are very talented please continue to write more stories like these please.
| boredsoul34 chapter 18 . 2/8/2007
that story as like so awesome!
| mel chapter 5 . 6/19/2006
im not trying to make u mad but there was a little slip up in this part-
That Monday morning was also the start of a new school week. Hilary came and got me at 8:30 and school started at 9:00. Lucky for me the Bennets left at 6:00 so I didn’t have to say goodbye to I got to school, I saw Hilary waiting for me by my locker. When she saw me, she gave me a huge hug.
it says hilary came and got me, but then it says, when i saw hilary at school.
just wanted to let u kno so that you could fix it if u wanted!
| Dying Flames chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
| Dirty Secret chapter 18 . 4/4/2006
Oh..wow, this is a VERY interesting story! I loved every bit of it and it definitely deserved a truckload more reviews. I look forward to reading your other stories!
| f chapter 17 . 11/25/2005
it's adorable. Can't wait for the rest of the series. )
| ThroughTheLookingGlass13 chapter 20 . 10/1/2005
Yep it's on MCBC! BTW, I read your story (this one) a long time ago, but never got the chance to comment! It's awesome! When I find time, I seriously have to read the sequal!
| Green Eyed Pixie chapter 17 . 9/3/2005
Dude i totally loved this so much, i mean trent and sophie are so sweet together and i loved the ending. And my name is Sophie too. heh, i sound extremly sad don't i? Keep up the good work!
| candikisses chapter 18 . 8/25/2005
WOW i love this, its so much fun to read - please write more on your other two stories, i really like your style of writing and i love stories like this! i want a trent!
| minderella chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
| Destination-Heaven chapter 19 . 8/1/2005
This is such a great story! i absalutley love it and everything about it!the way things are described. ahh, u just don't understand how good it is. Apart form the minor spelling mistakes everything else was brilliant, and i love the plot of the story. Gurl keep up the good work!
| NomadicWriter chapter 19 . 7/31/2005
YAY hehe well im glad you liked my idea and I can't wait to read it! woo well I can't wait to read both - they sound very interesting well please update them soon - i'll be waiting.-Kate xoxo
| Your Anti-Drug chapter 17 . 7/31/2005
aww I love how this fairy tale story ended...aww