Reviews for Melancholy
Hamlet Survives chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
its an ok poem, the halls kind of remind me of schools

it sounds like a nice start to a story however i dont feel like it comes 'full circle'
Stephen Fierce Publications chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Good. I like it.
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Good job. Sorry it has been a while since i have reviewed any of your work. Well i like it but the ending leaves me wondering and thinking something more is suppose to come but all in all it has good rythming whihc isn't forced, good rythym . Love always and forever mandi
CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Simple but powerful. Excellent. This was a great one.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
sad and well done
Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Wow, been a while since I read any of your work I think, or has it just been a while since you posted? But nevertheless this is amazing. Good ryhme, but dont get TOO caught up in that. The flow is brilliant though, and it gets the point across.

s chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
aw, so sad.