Reviews for Melancholy
Hamlet Survives chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
its an ok poem, the halls kind of remind me of schools

it sounds like a nice start to a story however i dont feel like it comes 'full circle'
Stephen Fierce Publications chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Good. I like it.
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
Good job. Sorry it has been a while since i have reviewed any of your work. Well i like it but the ending leaves me wondering and thinking something more is suppose to come but all in all it has good rythming whihc isn't forced, good rythym . Love always and forever mandi
CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Simple but powerful. Excellent. This was a great one.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
sad and well done
Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Wow, been a while since I read any of your work I think, or has it just been a while since you posted? But nevertheless this is amazing. Good ryhme, but dont get TOO caught up in that. The flow is brilliant though, and it gets the point across.

ANNA
s chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
aw, so sad.