Reviews for Lover, Won't You Save Me?
Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Sad poem, and has a realistic outlook on the world. Realistic means true, and the truth is agony...though that's not a very good thing to think about. A story all in one poem, brilliant.

ANNA
Lemaly Orangeflower chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Hmm...this is very good. I like it. I know that I have felt this way before. I have been so hurt that I feel like I'm standing in the rain, as pure and vulnerable as ever, and that only one person can save me. I really liked your honesty in this. Very truthful, and very well written.