Reviews for Flaxen Time
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
nice repition... great poem
Astarayl chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Beautiful rhyme scheme and descriptions. Your writing is deep and enchanting- good job on holding the rhyme scheme well without it becoming overwhelming.

I really enjoyed the first three stanzas- I felt the last one could have flowed a little better.

Nonetheless, the ending was still proper, and fit the feel of the poem- how it was a warning all along...

"With strength comes mightAnd blindless sightI cannot let it crush my soul"

I especially like these lines This was worthwhile to read, and I really enjoyed it- keep writing :D