Reviews for What will the world become?
AsTheRainFalls chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
I love this, I feel the same way. Thanks for the reviews!
unsociably-extrovertal chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I absolutely LOVE this piece! Gorgoues contrasts! (I've always been a sucker for contrasts and oxymorons and contradictions... hah!)

Yea, I've seen both sides of it, the deep majestic wonders of nature, and the dull fabricated plastics of...Sydney. (or my room) ha!

Totally insightful~ instant Fav.
I've left FP chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
This one was great and very describing, a wonderful poem, great job.~~~ClAiRe CaLLeSeN~~~(I love it cuz i see the grace of the world every day, living in the country)
myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Great contrast. caliorbust
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Lovely use of color and imagery.
countryrocker chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Good. Very nice, it has a wonderful speed to it.
Auroter chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Nice. I really like this one. Good imagery and the concept hits home for me. I like your poetry style as well. Its flow is interesting.

I understand the question mark at the end, since the sentence began with 'Why' but it surprised me and seemed leave the poem incomplete, or left hanging. Perhaps this is the effect you are going for? Dunno.
Mr. Raven chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
i like this poem. beautiful use of adjectives is sublime...

incredible. chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
that is awesome... i love it!