Wish i had a goblin/orange

lol, wow, poor Arty. my favorite part was the stop sign line. that was awesome. some of the details were...well nasty to say the least. (Shower day...i would hate to work with him) also the part about what kind of bills and how "he forgot to ask her out." was pretty funny. which did he end up taking a shower in? cold or hot? that could have been a humerous detail u could add if u want to. a few parts felt just a wee bit rushed but nothing bad. interesting choice of hair, dark orange and everything. anyway, this was a pretty fun read, good job!

~Mack

PS no reviewing every chapter isnt at all tiresome - we appriciate it!

not bad, but i'm not sure why this is in the humor section.