Reviews for A Short story about being alone
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
hmm funny :3
temblance chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
that was interesting. you were right on the summary, it really is short. But anyway, I think that this would be a really great idea for a poem. It almost has a poetic rhythm at the beginning. The ending was kind of random, but good all the same.
Clodhopper chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
that was...interesting to say the least. it was so short it almost seemed like if you'd change a few things you'd have a poem. The pizza man part could have used a wee bit of clarification because when i read it i was like..."wait, what?" but other than it was fun. my favorite part was the very first line, i dont know why but i thought that part was awesome - it's what caught my attention


PS thank you so much for your continued reviews! I know the relationship between Ravi and Ryder seems odd right now but it will later be explained. he was joking about hanging his slave - he'll do it a few more times. and, yes, action will return.
garn92 chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Heh... Thas funny. u made a funny! I usually prefer being alone, though. Then I let my imagination work out the stories i put on this site
crimson sugar chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Well, that was quite random...

I think the first part (before the mention of pizza man) is quite true, and realistic.