Reviews for Sinking Into The Night
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
that's so cool. I love the choice you decided to put on the summary. I love the 'taunting candle flames'This is almost abstract, and very good. Brilliant! Love it!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
The angst and tragedy in this poem aligns the poem itself superbly. One recommendation for you; Try writing poems with rhymes in it, wow, that would be a classic. :)

Pearls and Formaldehyde chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I like this! It's a good poem! I love the angst in this a lot!

p.s.: Thanks for the review!
ad9a chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
the description is superb..i imagined this perfectly from reading it..
Black Mustang chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
I like this, it haunts after you read it and you have to read it again, if you get what i mean. Theres lots of imagery and its very aware of everything. You have really good descripyive techniques and i love your imagery. Nice one. Black Mustang.
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Wow, very nice! There's a great use of imagery yet it portrays something deeper than the actual scene. Very metaphorical with lots of emotion. I like it a lot, it was very well-written. Keep up the great work!

And thanks so much for your review on "Glimpses of Nature". I'm glad you liked it, and your reflection on it was exactly what I wanted to portray!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
I love that alliteration "glare of my glance" Very fierce with passion.