Reviews for Norse Mythology Haikus
Wind of Odin chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
The trees sway aside.
For the wind may pass trough them.
Odin's wind reigns on.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 5 . 7/28/2005
Wow, nice play on words there with "mourning" or "morning" Beautiful.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 4 . 7/28/2005
This has a nice, defiant tone to it.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 7/28/2005
It is fine, although not descriptive.
ygg chapter 5 . 7/28/2005
Oh this is nice! I really like the way you picked your words. Absolutely great imagery!
ygg chapter 4 . 7/28/2005
ygg chapter 3 . 7/28/2005
It's not thát bad to despise it :) Though the flow isn't optimal, it has a nice imagery. It's still quite an achievement to effectively write haikus about such specific figures from Norse mythology!
ygg chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
About Alaisiagae: you captured their essence perfectly in yet another set of very powerful words! Great work.
ygg chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Oh you're starting a collection of Norse mythology haikus. Excellent ;)

I like Aegir, though I have to admit the flow is a bit broken in the second line.. Nevertheless, great imagery!
Alex chapter 2 . 7/27/2005
wow, some how Norse myth and haikus don't mix. I'd expect a Norse poem to be in - like - octametre or something more beowulfian. Not exactly an edda. Whatever, all is groovy!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 7/27/2005
Glad you starting a Norse Mythology collection!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Lacks flow, I think it could be could, but idk its kinda hard to read. I like the idea I guess, but I think it needs a little work. caliorbust