Reviews for A Day At The Beach
lindsey chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
whe! free sombrero! where? where? hehehe. awesome story guys...
Particularly Clementine chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Lovely. It's great. Very hillarious! :-)
Gurt Rude Malanos chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
lol this was pretty pointless but still funny. lol
Alexandrea Romanzesco chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
hahahahaha! one of our best stories, chels! so funny just like us!

alex
Sophie August chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Wow. This is so obviously an inside joke that I think my review of it would be pointless. But perhaps ... add more spatial information (describe their surroundings, characters' movements, ect). The only part I found rather amusing was: "He begins to eat the mailbox and sits in the chair." It was too fast, too pell-mell ... more of a joke than a story, as was the point.