I think it's pretty funny, I mean, I actually laughed, you know.

I think the rhyming seems forced, but I understand the message. Good job. *thumbs up*

this is cute! and it rhymes! do you kno how HARD it is to get my poems to rhyme! and as odd as it is, it has a good point/reason for existing, great job!

~night

It's not stupid, it's really good. It portrays loads of what you have to say, and the ending should have a lasting impression. :)

~~Trinity

Hilariously thought provoking and interesting.)

a very informative poem! yet it still shows concern towards society!

Hey, appreciate the review you gave... have a look now:D.. i really admire this poem, it has a twist in it that sets it apart from the norm. it has good ryhme, and nothing seems very forced. good work

! NOW THIS IS HUMOR!i love it!HAHAHA! ..uh..my tummy hurts from laughing... never "untwist" that twisted brain of yours!lol!

this is very..odd humor..but for some reason i found it slightly amusing, and thats always good..although it covers many topics by the looks of it...