|Reviews for False Escapes|
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Yea, this is described really well, the feeling and examples you give really make a convincing point, and ever views from both sides of a problem. Then again, I beleive that there isn't a true escape, or any way out even temporarily that doesn't have bad effects on somone or something. But you live, and drink, and have fun. And I beleive in that, but not in all purposes.
| pinhead.gunpowder chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Hey!Wow...your reviews were the most heartful, and like true ones I've ever heard. And I haven't gotten much. Hahah..but seriously though, I'm not some sorta God writter, although your shoutout thing is so cute, and almost made me cry, it was so sweet :) But yeah, seriously, all my poems I just can't write on the spot like you do, like I don't have the talent for that. It's when I'm feeling some sorta strong emotion. Usually in the night, when I cry off to bed or something, I'm a loser. So basically, those poems don't happen much. But you have such a different talent than me, and of course it's nice to alter your style sometimes, but you should keep the style you have now...like I'm not really sure how to explain it, it's the writing format you go through, but it's really great, so keep that...and just, well the thing is, you write from the heart already. Are you just trying to make your poems sound true? Because they sound excellent, and very real already, since you're writing from life situations. I love your writing! Maybe we can try out for English courses instead at NYU :P
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