Reviews for broken crystal
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I liked the Haiku! I could really feel, what you meant.
a moth in lace chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
This is a great poem, even if it was 5-7-6. I have so many ideas as to what it's about, and this poem has sent them rippling through my mind. Spectacular work, I must say. _

-marie
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
"blooming touch" How that warms the soul, and my smile spreads wide.
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
wow-the last line concludes it brilliantly and leaves me wondering...a fave *smiles and puts it in her favourites* :)

EEbony.
Fahad chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Ty for the review and i like this one, good job
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
sometimes the not-so-fitting haikus are the best, and this could very well be used as an example of that. lovely!
Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
"with one stroke of pen" would work just as well. I loved your choice of words.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
This is lovely. Anyone who does not read this because of the 5-7-6 pattern is a fool.