Reviews for Your Love, My Poison
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
The structure works very well, and I like the confused mixture of passion and hatred. Despite the emotional pain, it still has an almost erotic feel to it.

Matt
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Wow. Awesome stuff. Short and to the point, which is sometimes a good thing to do, in this case it was a good thing to do. It flows job.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
Don't be sorry! The choppiness is a great effect. Beautiful! I hope this isn't true. It's so heart wrentching...
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
THIS IS NOT CHOPPY IN ANY WAY...ilove it...*pops raison into mouth*
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Hey, as the last reviewer said, the chopyness is actually really good in this poem!
MadBlackWoman chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
i actually think the choppiness works well for this poem and what it stands for. I like it, good work.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Wow, I liked this one. Yeah, I wrote a Hate poem too...