Reviews for With the Snow
MyCookiesNotYours chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
This poem is so sweet. As are most of your poems, though seem not to be meant to. This one was especially nice, because of the whole entire theme of it.
Rowvle chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Amazing, your poems are brilliant, please write some more! :):)

Reduvis Ekkilo chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
It is rather cryptic. Is it saying that the narrator was in love with a snowflake? (stupid question)
Mr. Singh is back chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
All your poems are great. I review on this one because, hey, its not about killing people! naw, but, I don't know. I like this one the best probably cause I can really relate to this one, parts of it anyway. Comparing the girl to snow that comes and goes. Perfect.
Darthen chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
I thought I ought to pay back your review of Fred and review one of your creative works, rather than just the essays all the time. Has anyone told you that you write a lot of essays?

Excellent rhyme scheme, good rythm, I like the message, and the metaphor is good too. All in all, I thought that this was pretty good. Loved the last two lines.
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
How very beautiful. I love the metaphor of someone coming with the snow and leaving with it...the hope of seeing them the next time you see the first snowflake touch your nose.. beautiful thoughts and wonderful piece. Magical almost...beautiful...