This poem is so sweet. As are most of your poems, though seem not to be meant to. This one was especially nice, because of the whole entire theme of it.

Amazing, your poems are brilliant, please write some more! :):)

~ToXiC~

It is rather cryptic. Is it saying that the narrator was in love with a snowflake? (stupid question)

All your poems are great. I review on this one because, hey, its not about killing people! naw, but, I don't know. I like this one the best probably cause I can really relate to this one, parts of it anyway. Comparing the girl to snow that comes and goes. Perfect.

I thought I ought to pay back your review of Fred and review one of your creative works, rather than just the essays all the time. Has anyone told you that you write a lot of essays?

Excellent rhyme scheme, good rythm, I like the message, and the metaphor is good too. All in all, I thought that this was pretty good. Loved the last two lines.

How very beautiful. I love the metaphor of someone coming with the snow and leaving with it...the hope of seeing them the next time you see the first snowflake touch your nose.. beautiful thoughts and wonderful piece. Magical almost...beautiful...