Reviews for Love is Sweet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha I found the ending cute:). Ur oneshot was well written and also I loved it XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute and SO funny! ...Where's the ice cream? I WANTED THAT FOREPLAY!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! I love it. Amusing. 'Not my fault you lost the damn ice-cream.' Love that line. Made me crack up. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw this is SO cute! i love the last two lines. normally i hate it when it's not more explicit but this was just perfect enuff for it to work. awesome job! many HUGS!, ELEMENT p.s.-your an awesome writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet scene. I liked the idiosyncratic touches and the glimpses into the past/future of their relationship. I like that while its centered around sex between the two characters, you manage to use that to convey alot in a short space about them and their relationship, rather than it just being about the sex, and as a result that's pretty hot too. Your writing and the dialogue felt really natural as well. |