Purely delightful cleverness. Love the brilliant un-butchered rhyming.

grins. this is incredible! i applaud you.

This made me smile. Fantastic job.

This is really fabulous. Your rhymes are perfect. The ending is really fantastic, because you use casual language while still maintaining the rhythm and feel of the piece.

You have a really wonderful grasp on humor, something I only wish I could employ in my writing. Your rhymes are literally hilarious (crux to sucks, bench to wench). You got your point across loud and clear, and so this poem is a complete success.

I think this is brilliant, and so true! I kind of wish I didn't relate to it so much...

The ending made me laugh out loud :)

I also enjoyed the inherent sarcasm of this piece. The wording is simple, honest and very effectively paints the picture.

Thanks for your review of my work :)

Finely written, and loaded with unhindered truth. I love you forever.

Oh my goodness, I can't stop laughing! Let me catch my breath. *inhales slowly* Ok, I think I'm all right now. WOW! Your wording is so clever. Imagine that! Talent and humor in the same poem! This is going in my Favorite Stories list, and I hope to see more where that came from. Not necessarily the same topic, but clever like that. )

-Leila

I love the witty sarcasm in this, delightful rhyming.

Aw, that makes me feel so much better for being single

Haha. The second line made me laugh. Bitter is a good word to some it up, for sure. But it's funny )

I love it. It's beautiful and deep. :)

~~Trinity