That awkward moment when lesbians are actually accepted in Britain as well.

Love it very very much!

wow great story with amazing ending i love it.
great job keep on writing

I was thinking that this was less than average but then I saw 'England times' and I felt angry. England is a country which has many towns. You had a good concept but ruined if by writing badly!

AWESOME! Thanks for the great read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!

Overall it wasn't well written, and had some typos, but I liked the concept.. or subject.. or whatever they call it that you wrote about. The Rich falling for the Maid. I dunno. The format (Chunky!) was kinda hard to read but made it seem longer (which is a plus) and gave it a unique feel. I've never seen anything like that soo.. cheers for you.

Word of advice: when doing thoughts, it's easier to make it italicized or something thats contrasting, not just parenthesis.

Luck writing.

~ibbit

I think this was cute. :) great job!

I like your writing, but the centering made it hard to read for me.

fvey nice, but i advise you to change the layous to normal, its very confusing and e annoying

awesome

ciao

Samantha

xx

yes my name is samantha :P

Aw, what a sweet ending. nicely done.

Why is it centered? And I would advise some proof reading.

cool story, keep it up