Reviews for showers
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I loved the imagery brought out in this poem. Enjoyed the lines like 'tiny greens in murmurs', 'whispers of laughing whims' and 'a spectrum's symphony, an eternity of life' the most. The ending was crisp and impactful.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
A whispering of the heart sends cascades of emotion. Truly wonderful.
rei chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
pretty! and so deep i cannot understand. like what is pyrrhic. aah.
Archipelago chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
very pretty love that first stanza
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
y'know, you have this thing for imagery. like this mad talent for it. this is so damn beautiful, honey. i might hate you.
omi chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
beautiful.