Reviews for Heaven
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
True. Heaven is open for everyone including those who have sinned.
Silver Elementalist chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
O_O... *cough* -looks at doctor- Gender change please!

Lol, I don't believe in Heaven either, but I DO believe that when you die, you experience absolute peace, and learn that only a few things matter.

Undersanding, and endless love. :) So hop up, and be happy! XD But nice Haiku, no matter how scary.
Glittering Innocence chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
very intense

good job :)
chibicherrychan chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Men kill and ravish women, huh? That's one dark world you live in. I'm not sure you need such violence to prove heaven doesn't exist but alright... that's one way to see things.
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
It's direct and subtle at the same time. Pretty cool.
CerriC chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I just wanted to let you know, some guy on the TV just said "parenteral digestion". Yeah, like the macrophages. *grins*

Oh, nice haiku too. Actually, I've never been a fan of haikus. Interesting, though.
KangarooJack chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
You know I like Haikus I can see you like them too,good job,quite nice
Cyle chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Hmm, this is a good poem about what people of the past have made Heaven out to be.

And as everyone else said: very dark. )

I like it D.
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Intresting poem... well writen.
k chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
its so disgusting the way in which the darkness is woven,but a wonderful observation.
Autumn-Flowers chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
:(I am a bit mixed up about heaven.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I am a little confused by the contradictions, but it is intriguing.
liz anya chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Verk dark...
M.L chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
have you seen those ancient paintings of heaven,with swords in the hands of men and blood on their lips,naked women being ravished all over the pictures? so true,so true.

Maria Lebraska