This is wonderful, thank you!

Its not the usual 'fall in love with the evil king' and I guess I liked that :)

wow ! nice story line :)

Wow. That was AMAZING! Absolutly brillant. I liked the background to the wedding and the detail, and how the title fit in with the last sentence. i like it when people do that :)

just one suggestion: maybe add more dialouge in the beginning and more thoughts and things like that

but i LOVE it :)

x lauren

This is great. i cant wait for another chap

I absolutely LOVE it! I agree with your reviewers when they say that this is really good.. and I LOVE your characterization of the king... it's quite original.

I only wish you'd continue it, so we could see what other 'troubles' Vanora gets into ;)

I have to agree with your other reviewers. This is a wonderful story and I wish yo'd continue it.

I absolutely loved the story. Vanora is my idol. Okay, not really, but I adore her character. She didn't act before she thought of things, nor did she keep her mouth shut and be the dummy that sat next to the king.

Speaking of, Antavas has to be one of the best written kings I have ever read about. Sure, the story was more for Vanora, but I don't know how this came to be, but I like Antavas. Most kings would kill their wives for speaking against them, but he didn't. Kudos for him.

It's a pity you don't plan to add on new chapters or finish it. My vote would be to continue writing, even if you didn't post it on FP and get it published. I truly think it's that good. No, it's not good; it's a bloody good read.

Regina O.B.

Wow. Seriously, that was really good. It's such a pity you won't be updating it - this is very good. Vanora is extremely likeable, as well as strong and resourceful and compassionate. It was written very well, with beautiful words and a good, interesting plot. In fact, the only problem with your story was a problem with spelling and grammar errors.

I loved the ending; thought it was very well done. Kudos.