LOVED IT! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Thank you for sharing it with us here on Fictionpress

This isn't a chapter comment but an overall comment for your story.

Completely loved this story. Realistic, beautifully crafted characters, rich dialogue and action; could not fault it at all.

Just wanted to say thank you for such a wonderful story and may you continue to write many more.

Pippee :)

Haha. wow. I was listening to random music in youtube and across with this song "Every Avenue - Between You and I" . . . quite fitting with this story from what i've read so far. :)

BTW, I really like the plot of the story. :)

I know this story is super old now, but I just got around to reading it. And it was great! Riddled with typos and some inconsistency, but that's what a rough draft is. But the substance, props. The characters all have a very distinct voice, even Boss.

I also really enjoyed seeing another side to Avery. His transformation was a little abrupt but leaving a small town for the first time may have that effect on someone.

Are you still posting on this site? Or even your own website? I would loveee to read your sequel to this, but I'm not even sure you're still working on it. LOL

But great story! I read it all in one sitting :)

I realise this story is a few years old, but I just wanted to say that I really really enjoyed it! it is well written and keeps the reading engrossed. thank you so much for sharing this with everyone.

To be honest I really love your story. Keep writing I will certainly read something more. Good luck

Oh wow, I loved this! The characters were so amazing! The errors made it difficult at times, but since this is just a rough draft that's not important. Ohh goodness, I'm in love with Rock! Haha, and Tate, too. I can't wait to go check out your other stories! I really loved how slowly they fell for each other, and that romance wasn't the main thing on their mind. It was so refreshing to read! Thanks you! Be seeing you around,
BatDarling.

Really quickly, you first say that Sundance is a girl, then say that "she" sired a foal. (I assume Sundance is a boy) could you fix that please?

Loved it to the very end! LIKE SOOOO MUCH! You're such an amazing writer. Gosh, even read in class and didn't do work just to read it - yeah, I'm bad :) but... yeesh, I can't stop rambling. Anyways, it was awesome and really really loved Nick (i see a little of my-self in her XD)

this is one of the best stories i have seen on this site! wow. excellent. you are an amazing writer!

Oh my goodness. This story was amazing.

It was so action packed and emotional. I loved reading it. I love action and action movies. (Can't stand horror ones though.)

The ending was really short, but not bad.

This was just plain awesome. :)

This was really nice! I absolutely adored the characters. The plot was a little slow moving in the beginning (Tate didn't come until chapter four!) but I liked how I really had a handle on all the characters by that time. As for the plot itself, I thought it was amazing! It was well thought out, and always had some nice twist. The romance seemed a little fake though, one day they won't admit to even liking each other and the next they're saying "I love you"? But I thought the Natalie/Rock romance was really well done. It was a smart subplot.

I don't usually go for historical fiction. Honestly, I didn't even know that was what Glasses and Garters was until around chapter two. I was finding a way to make this all happen in the present (in a very judgemental area in Southern Texas). That was the one thing I didn't like about this novel-I didn't know what time this was occuring during. It didn't even say anything until around the nineteenth chapter, and even then it only said it was around the time of the civil war.

I thought the ending was a little cliche (Penny throwing herself on Tate and Nick not able to forgive him), but I did enjoy the actual ending, when they were talking.

Become. A. Novelist.

I beg of you.

I will buy every single one of your books.

Other than some grammar/spelling errors, everything was just... amazing. In a fashion, it was ever so slightly predictable (as are most Romance Stories/Novels/Novellas/Novelettes), but there were some plot twists that I absolutely adored. This whole story, I adore.

I could imagine every single character, even what their voices sounded like. I loved how the setting was traditional, but not often used. I also loved how you had their slang and even accents (at least I thought there were some).

Beautifully written, but I'd check grammar/spelling errors beforehand, unless that was what you wanted.

As I said before, I absolutely loved this story! Hello. Favorites.

I usually don't comment on a story until the very end, when I've read it through and through, but there was a very small something in this chapter I had to comment on. Nick's dress was white when she went to church. This really bothered me. In the setting you are writing in, the women are very very practical, and would never wear white anywhere because of how dirty it would get and the stains that they would never be able to get out. What a character wears says a lot about there personality, and while Nick is very original and a person of her own, this one little detail just didn't fit in with what life was back then. Of course she may be frivolous and not care that she could only where the dress once, but she doesn't really come off as that sort of person.

Now, I kind of want to scrap his entire message, because who really cares what the character is wearing. Well, in answer to that, I do. Like I said above it says a lot about the character, and matters as much anything.

Great Job! Awesome Story!