Interesting.

You're back! I loved the update! I am not sure where this goddess thing is going ( I do have some theories), but I really enjoy it! Please don't wait so long to post the next chapter!

Intriguing, but raises more questions than it answers. If Caitlin is Veyn, the ashfolk would not want her memory to return, although they seem to be arranging it. Could it be Ephemera that just approached?

cool another chapter..

keep it coming..

Dam right the wait sucked..
Been waiting from an update from you foreever..
but som etimes good stories requier time to write. So keep up the good work..

..Please don't take so long but oh well..

A captivating read, as usual, but possibly a little too linear in the battle and conclusion. I would go back and foreshadow the arrival of Reisshen, and maybe leverage Kazemaru's magic against him, such as escaping the mist and entrapping him simultaneously.

I would look into another career, I would.

Baaaaaaaa

Wow! this is amazing! I really do hope you continue on with this story.

So I was just wondering when you are going to spoil us readers with an update? Soon perhaps?

Ok so I read the update almost a month ago and realized I never left a review to say how much I love this story! I really want an update soon!

Well:

Glad to see you got another chapter out. Giving cat that sword will really blow the kings mind and piss him off more. Poor bastered won't know know wether to run or piss his pants the first time she swings it in front of him. If he knows any type of humbling himself. It should before that girls gets mad at him. But that would not be him or this stories style. This king is arrogent and brash with a touch of insanity or how would you hold a kingdom with wovles at your door. Yet I can see this girl has a few more things to give him nightmares before she arrives at the castle before him. Woo be to the fool who dares earn this womans scorn.

Keep it coming... Been a bit to long in waiting. But I know writing is not easy to all people nor time as giving. It must come at its own pace and without distraction.

P.S. I can write stories as well but they burst out like a wave and one distration distorys the whole thing. I wrote a 15 page story in three days but I feel it would not be the type that most folks would like to read. For it is very controversionary. How dose one give looking at God from a different view? For that is what its about.

Avid reader

Ghost.

I had to go back and review the last few chapters to get back into it, but it was well worth the wait. This chapter flows well and has very clever banter. It seems to set the stage for some action in the next chapter, which hopefully will not be long in coming.

I didn't catch anything new being revealed in the dichotomy of Caitlin's persona, and she seems to be distancing herself from both Galahad and Marcus, so maybe Torren's role will increase as pressure mounts from Ephemera. (Just guessing, but it sounds like Brian may become an ally.)

Looking forward to the next chapter. Since you seem to be at a break point, how about drawing a map of the lands?

So far Sersque is my favorite character. You brilliantly captured the pompousness of royalty, both in attitude and physical description.

I'm a little confused about Reisshen. Shouldn't she have made her move before Caitlin leaves? And since Caitlin is still not 100% comfortable with who she is, it seems strange that she would let Reisshen touch her without flinching. Well, I guess I'll have to read more to find out...