Reviews for The Seal of Prayers
Miss Lost chapter 21 . 6/24/2010

I've been waiting for a new chapter for ages (no pressure)! I really like the depth and the plot.

Just a suggestion though, I think you might want to work on caitlin's character. i.e. how she interacts with others and thinks.

Keep up the good work, I'd love to read more.
The Silent Orion chapter 21 . 6/19/2010
And caitlin thinks the situation with the commoners is complex. Should look a bit closer. It's a glass house of cards.
Never Winter chapter 20 . 3/28/2010
I really like the transition Caitlin is having, it's not really that awkward in the plotline. When it was first introduced I figured it wouldn't be very good.
Ghost chapter 20 . 3/3/2010
No problem:

I find it nice to enjoy good stories that keep things flowing. You are doing good at keeping the events in time with what is going on. I'll be waiting for the next part.
The Silent Orion chapter 20 . 3/3/2010
Awesome. I quite like the ending.
Ghost chapter 19 . 2/22/2010

I would say your writing is perty well advanced. Your story has good base and stays in flow. Please continue for it is very addictive to see the next chapter.
Forever Isn't Real chapter 18 . 12/18/2009

can i just

i'm a new reader for the fact, i spent all of today reading it. great way to spend a saturday, me thinks.

but i also think you should update soon :D

yeah? yeah.
gdhi chapter 7 . 10/16/2009
this is actually a real good fantasy story but the huge gap between the published date and the updated date kinda put me off. how often do you update?
gdhi chapter 4 . 10/15/2009
interesting story.
NopeNopeNope14 chapter 18 . 10/14/2009
I am definitely enjoying this more badass side of Caitlin and can't wait to read more!
Casey Drake chapter 16 . 8/10/2009
This is ~amazing.~ -grinning- I'm really very deeply interested in how this is going to work out. With the soul of a demon, mixed with the soul of a human, in a human's body, one has to wonder how Caitlin is going to end up, in terms of the balance of good and evil.

NopeNopeNope14 chapter 16 . 8/7/2009
Are you setting up a romance between Torren and Caitlin? Very kinky :P

This chapter flows fairly well and I think it's about time for the obvious to become common knowledge.
Solar Flares and Technicolor chapter 16 . 8/7/2009
Finally all caught up! Glad to know officially Brian was a fake, I had his voice in my head and whenever he spoke it was like nails on a chalkboard. Which I guess is a sign of good writing. And I liked the dream sequence I thought it was really well written.

Can't wait for the next part!
CeliB chapter 15 . 7/20/2009
I truly enjoyed read this story. I find Caitlin previous life very she come to be under the Ashlanders' control and how she was able to break their control. Is there a complex relationship between Asra and Eterna? The way it's heading I don't think Caitlin will find her "soulmate"...sad because I'm beginning to like her. Marcus is just an ass! Traven almost seems likely to have feelings for the Esshen, since they're fleeing I'm wondering whats in store for Caitlin now...will she save herself or will others come to her aid? Hope you'll upload more chapters, this story very addictive.
NopeNopeNope14 chapter 15 . 7/16/2009
Just finished and am thirsty for more! I must say, I like Caitlin a lot more now and I love the action, drama and humor mixture. It keeps the story from getting bogged down, but still complex and intense. That's a difficult balance and I'm glad to say that you have mastered it.
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