Hi

I've been waiting for a new chapter for ages (no pressure)! I really like the depth and the plot.

Just a suggestion though, I think you might want to work on caitlin's character. i.e. how she interacts with others and thinks.

Keep up the good work, I'd love to read more.

And caitlin thinks the situation with the commoners is complex. Should look a bit closer. It's a glass house of cards.

I really like the transition Caitlin is having, it's not really that awkward in the plotline. When it was first introduced I figured it wouldn't be very good.

No problem:

I find it nice to enjoy good stories that keep things flowing. You are doing good at keeping the events in time with what is going on. I'll be waiting for the next part.

Awesome. I quite like the ending.

Hello:

I would say your writing is perty well advanced. Your story has good base and stays in flow. Please continue for it is very addictive to see the next chapter.

o.O

can i just say..wow?

i'm a new reader for the story...in fact, i spent all of today reading it. great way to spend a saturday, me thinks.

but i also think you should update soon :D

yeah? yeah.

this is actually a real good fantasy story but the huge gap between the published date and the updated date kinda put me off. how often do you update?

interesting story.

I am definitely enjoying this more badass side of Caitlin and can't wait to read more!

This is ~amazing.~ -grinning- I'm really very deeply interested in how this is going to work out. With the soul of a demon, mixed with the soul of a human, in a human's body, one has to wonder how Caitlin is going to end up, in terms of the balance of good and evil.

:D CD

Are you setting up a romance between Torren and Caitlin? Very kinky :P

This chapter flows fairly well and I think it's about time for the obvious to become common knowledge.

Finally all caught up! Glad to know officially Brian was a fake, I had his voice in my head and whenever he spoke it was like nails on a chalkboard. Which I guess is a sign of good writing. And I liked the dream sequence I thought it was really well written.

Can't wait for the next part!

I truly enjoyed read this story. I find Caitlin previous life very interesting...how she come to be under the Ashlanders' control and how she was able to break their control. Is there a complex relationship between Asra and Eterna? The way it's heading I don't think Caitlin will find her "soulmate"...sad because I'm beginning to like her. Marcus is just an ass! Traven almost seems likely to have feelings for the Esshen, since they're fleeing I'm wondering whats in store for Caitlin now...will she save herself or will others come to her aid? Hope you'll upload more chapters, this story very addictive.

Just finished and am thirsty for more! I must say, I like Caitlin a lot more now and I love the action, drama and humor mixture. It keeps the story from getting bogged down, but still complex and intense. That's a difficult balance and I'm glad to say that you have mastered it.