Reviews for When I Eat Cheesecake
masked moment chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Lol! That is friggen awesome! I have written about food before too! IT makes me happy :P lol. I love this poem!
AikiChaos chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Ah, look, you made me hungry! Nice haiku, it sounds like a nursery rhyme to me. LOL! It has a orderly progession, the sentences vivifying inside my mind like, CHEESECAKE!, then , NICE, and finally, YUM!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Oh my god, my mouth is watering now! :)

guitargodess chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
hahaha im craving cheesecake!
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
O.O CHEESECAKE! ::faints:: ::probably dies but doesn't:: OH MAN. ::deep, relaxed sigh:: Cheesecake... Thank you kindly, my friend. Addictions at their finest... - (Any chance you'll write something on Boston Creme Pie? :-B)
hanfiddle chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
First class - just misses a word indicating the time of year - that would make it perfect
youzi chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
this made me feel hungry D
boredwithlife chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
just sharing, at a party, my uncle made me eat so much cheesecake, i puked! he kept telling me "i can see your face!i know you want more cheesecake!" im pretty much traumatized, plus,im lactose intolorant.. ANYWAY, great poem! it so fun! you better get a high grade for this! it's definatly going on my favorite stories list. keep posting more poems OR ELSE!
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
I love cheesecake. It's great. Good poem too.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
m cheesecake... _
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Hooray! I find it very tasty.
FilFil chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
I'm one of those people that doesn't really like cheesecake, but I think the haiku is pretty good. : )
prettykitty006 chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
that's kind of funny... I LUV cheesecake.