| Reviews for When I Eat Cheesecake |
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  masked moment chapter 1 . 10/24/2006 I |
 sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006 Lol! That is friggen awesome! I have written about food before too! IT makes me happy :P lol. I love this poem! |
| AikiChaos chapter 1 . 10/12/2005 Ah, look, you made me hungry! Nice haiku, it sounds like a nursery rhyme to me. LOL! It has a orderly progession, the sentences vivifying inside my mind like, CHEESECAKE!, then , NICE, and finally, YUM! |
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/6/2005 Oh my god, my mouth is watering now! :) ~~Trinity |
| guitargodess chapter 1 . 8/5/2005 hahaha im craving cheesecake! |
| maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 8/3/2005 O.O CHEESECAKE! ::faints:: ::probably dies but doesn't:: OH MAN. ::deep, relaxed sigh:: Cheesecake... Thank you kindly, my friend. Addictions at their finest... - (Any chance you'll write something on Boston Creme Pie? :-B) |
| hanfiddle chapter 1 . 8/1/2005 First class - just misses a word indicating the time of year - that would make it perfect |
| youzi chapter 1 . 8/1/2005 this made me feel hungry D |
| boredwithlife chapter 1 . 8/1/2005 just sharing, at a party, my uncle made me eat so much cheesecake, i puked! he kept telling me "i can see your face!i know you want more cheesecake!" im pretty much traumatized, plus,im lactose intolorant.. ANYWAY, great poem! it so fun! you better get a high grade for this! it's definatly going on my favorite stories list. keep posting more poems OR ELSE! |
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 7/31/2005 I love cheesecake. It's great. Good poem too. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 m cheesecake... _ |
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 Hooray! I find it very tasty. |
| FilFil chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 I'm one of those people that doesn't really like cheesecake, but I think the haiku is pretty good. : ) |
| prettykitty006 chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 that's kind of funny... I LUV cheesecake. |