Reviews for Black Tears
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
this piece has just has a very very good rhythm going with it...and the line "leaving me here in my winter" just touches something in me...good job...although i would like it better if the poem is on a formal format without the hyphens and stuff...

truly yours...
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Very nice work. Perhaps you should considered adding some more versus and developing the story a little more. Really well written piece here.
QueenVixta chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Nice, quite different. The flow really fits greensleeves. This is really beautiful. QueenVixta
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Hmm..I love the line 'leaving me in my winter' It really spoke to me for some reason..and the rest of the poem is just beautiful! What more can I say?

Much love, Rosanna.
LOSTxINSIDExMYxDREAMS chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
I've played Greensleeves manytimes on my violin...it is one of my favorite songs to play and this poem goes really good with it. I love the first two lines especially. Beautiful. I thought this was very clever! Keep writting more like this!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Really beautiful, very deep and I really like it. QueenVixta