Reviews for For You I Try
Anna178 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Its almost-well...it kinda repeats itself too much, like its a good point, and of which it gets across, though it kinda drags on on the same thing a little too long, which is funny because in this poem it says its either not enough or too much.

Anyway, I still like it, and its who you are.

ANNA
Fate Defied chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
this sort of sounds like my dad, or the way he used to be anyway. still sumthin tells me he needs to listen to me more. k/wshadowofyou