Um its great but the little squares everywhere are somewhat annoying...

I like the story/plot, but on the whole it feels rushed. The dialogue needs to be slowed a little maybe and there are a few grammar things here and there ("and I did... beaten her date to the dance!"). Other than that, things look good so far; it'll be interesting to see how things go from here.

Hee hee! Yeah, I meant more appendicies, but I wasn't really clear there. Sorry!

Ah! I type too fast for my brain sometimes and I often don't read reviews before I submit them! I meant her! oops!

*blush*

*rereads review before she submits*

Cool! I've wondered how you say a bunch of the words in here...I was close...most of the hee! Are there more after this?

Yay! I'm very happy you like SoE (sword of the Empress) I've become too lazy to type the whole thing out any more!I can't wait for the sequel please post it soon! I'll be looking for the Apendices! Post them soon!Again, wonderful book and I can't wait for the next one. The, oh so, impatientScottish Dragon

Wow! Wonderful ending. I do believe you could spend a tad more time in the last chapter explaining more about Pherdacil, I've very curious about him. I've loved this book, it's so wondeful! I love how it comes to a conclusion at the end and she goes home. Very very interesting! I hope that you start the next book very very soon! I can't wait!

Wow! That was a great chapter! I wonder if the voices she hears are real or her imagination...*darn* Guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out!

mythril? Is this similiar to Tolkien's mythril or is this different? You might want to explain what it is...other than that...great chapter!

Hee hee. The beginning does sound a bit like LOTR when Frodo wakes up in the house of hee! I laughed when Tori thought elves were . I like Hier, I hope he shows up later in this story or the next book...there is going to be another one...isn't there!

Wow, very short, but very angsty chapter! That's really interesting. I wonder what the bat-like creature was. Again, too anxious to write a longer review!

Interesting chapter. I hope that Rih listens to , I'm too interested in the next chapter to write a longer review now!

Yay! I'm so happy that you finally updated! I've been waiting for you to update! Yay! I'm so happy! Now, to read the chapter!Give me a second, while I reskim all the previous chapter to remember what had happened...Wonderful chapter! I love the cliffhanger and yay for me I don't have to wait to go on to the next chapter! Yay! This story is so cool!Well, onto chapter 18!

Great chapter! I like Rih, in an odd way. She's great. I like how they had the idea to get a room with someone too drunk to care. Very clever. Hum... I wonder why everyone was afraid of Tori's green eyes. Will be waiting, hopefully not as long though,The Scottish DragonP.S. Sorry, it's taken me this long, but I just got a chance to really read my reviews. My life's been crazy, so I've just skimmed them. Before I start sorry for the confusion. Sylth does not have the "talent" Robin does. I reread the first chapter after I read what you were questioning about. And it was very unclear who has the "talent". I'm so sorry! So, no Sylth has no "talent". I appologize for the confusion. I hope to edit and replace that chapter so that it is more clear! Again, I'm very very sorry to keep you in suspence over something that does not exist! Deepest appologies, hope you'll keep reading the story anyway!Yours,In humblest regret,The Scottish Dragon.P.P.S. Always look forward to your reviews!

YES! Very very very long period without posts! But yeah! update at last! Guess, I had become spolied by the frequent updates. chapter. The king's fear of the sun god is facinating! Will be waiting, hopefully not as long, for another Scottish Dragon

good chapie! I like prarie dogs! They're cute! Except here they seem a little scary. I wish I had Tori's gift for languages! I've got a bit of one, but not as good as she seems to have.

This is a good story, but you need to slow it down a bit. I'll read the rest later. Good job!

p.s. what's with all the boxes?p.p. you read my story The Arena?