Reviews for I Hate Fridays
jessan chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Your heart is in the right place. I love the way you have executed the themes of tension and stress. I used to work at a fast food joint myself so I can relate to this! My criticisms: poetry is for the laconic. A lot of the time you have simply just written sentences, not lines of a poem. Think about how you can envelope your emotions into one set piece.
Jhondy chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I really liked this. I work at McDonalds now and am in training to become manager. It is one crazy place. Oh and yes the hole totally sucks. I hate it there too. Great capture of the atmosphere of the job.