Reviews for Death
The Muffin Cake chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Wow. So very angsty. So very, very good. :D
amber-lynn chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
damn it Robin I love your mind even more than your body! your so awesome... I really liked this one
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Loved the ending so much I read it over and over again. It's the impact beyond the lines that brought me to review this piece. Another angsty little piece. :)

~~Trinity

p.s. Considered writing any rhyming poems lately? Will be a big hit in my list! :)
plottingmouse chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
That was beautiful! I could really relate to it because my grandpa died about a year ago and I didn't know him as well as I could have, and I wish I had tried. Your character brought me back to that. Please write more, you're a very good writer.
Mac Attack chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
woah. Excellent writing. I loved how you slowly changed the topic from how you died physically to how the person who loved you died emotionally. Amazingly descriptive. Hey, thanks for reviewing my poems! I'd love for you to review some more. And I see you only have three posted works up, you should put up some more soon because I want to read more of your writings!
Shes Never Known Happy chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
omg it was beautiful -sniffs- it brought tears to my eyes -wishes you luck-