killers wrist - killer's wrist.

"Drink," the demon whispers

AH. Very dark. Very. I liked it. I liked the fact that you had short, concise sentences. It allowed me to breeze through the poem and stop only at the lines that intrigued me. I also felt this...I dunno, Buffy-Angel vibe, if you know what I mean and have watched the shows. Eh. *Shrugs.* Anyway, I liked this. Great job.

-McQuinn

You capture the essence of the story with your description. Great job once again!

awesome!

wow! intense huh captivating gud poem

very very good. _ i enjoyed it a lot

darkly delicous!