Reviews for 5 Days, Then What?
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Distance clouds the joy, brings sorrow to it when focused onto... for all.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
oh wow. theres so much emotion to this, really wonderful piece of wrtiting. you capture so much in it i love: "I watch from this front porch step/While he spins/

And spins," fantastic imagery.
Chell-o Bodello chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Wow. I really can't find any words to describe how I feel after reading that (I'm not that great on expressing my views on love poems), but I still enjoyed reading this! Very well written. Keep writing!

~ Lunchi