Reviews for Lover at the window
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Gefällt mir gut, diese Übereinstimmung von äußerer und innerer Situation
ygg chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Sad yet beautiful. One little remark though.. perhaps it's just me but personally I wouldn't have used the word "and".. it breaks the flow a bit and makes the third line sound a little odd. Nevertheless, good work!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
The rain is weeping for the leaving.
mahogany lampshade chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
*sniff*... How sad...

Anyways, its good you captured the main idea of this haiku. Keep writing! _