this was wild from start to finish.. and i loved it more than anything. wish i could Wilfred's face XD

I have spent probably hundreds of hours on fiction press trying to find stories that can actually bring out any emotional response from me. Most leave me cold, but this was spectacular. I could feel Talon's despair in those chapters, and Anthony's depression and rebelliousness. Talon and Anthony are such sympathetic characters. You should be so proud that you can bring someone to the edge of tears 12 years after this was written, with nothing but your words (not to say that your words aren't amazing)

I KNEW IT! I F-king KNEW IT!

I THINK LANCE IS TALON.

Idk if Anthony is being sarcastic in the last one, or not? Srsly is he?

ROAST BOYS, ROAST. If this was a movie I'd definitely enjoy it, especially the fight.

Really gud, I'm not even finished but am liking this already.

holy shit holy fuck holy shit holy fuck holy-

yeah thats my internal monologue right now. i just. i need a moment. as a pansexual person i dont see representation often and when i do its often in fanfiction so when i see something original and its NOT overwhelmingly heteronormative i just.

thanks for writing this~

This is pretty awesome! I kind of wish that there was at least a little 1st or 3rd person though, but it was awesome nontheless! :D great job, and now gonna check out your profile
~Blue

This was soook creative and good.

wow that was resolved terribly
maybe the next chapter will fix things?

oh man is his name legit talon
did his mother name him after bird feet
aaaaaah this chapter is so cringily angsty, i love it

This was possibly the best story I've ever read! I'm soo glad I read it because I did reconsider at first because of the way it was formatted, but I absolutely love it. I was afraid that with it being in letter form the characters wouldn't come to life and the emotion would not be expressed but I was completely wrong about everything. I nearly cried when Anthony wouldnt speak to Talon and i became so giddy when they had that little peck. I love their personalities and appearance together. This is my new favorite story. It needs to become a book so I can keep it forever. I would say make a sequel, but it ended perfectly. There's no need for one.

So very confused with the ending...why didn't it continue and finish just after their first date or something?..not meaning to critirsize you story or anything, like it's your story you can finish it how you want but I am still really confused!
Is there any way you can explain it to me or something?
Okay, but I still loved you story and how you made it so they where sending letters to each other and I really feel for Anthony but I totally get why lance..oops sorry I mean talon hid his true identity from him, I would have done the same thing! Again loved it.

I know it's probably old, but I stumbled upon this story and I liked it a lot

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

*Excuse me for a moment, please*

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE

*okay I'm done*

Thank you for writing this! this story! Thank you for making such an amazing story.