Aww... That was heart-breaking. Seriously, it was powerful. I don't cry over stories, usually, but that got me really close.

The last 'Anthony...' as an uncompleted letter. That was a nice touch.

Get the next chapter up... I have to know.

Aw! Omg I read all of it in one go! Please update soon! . I wanna know what happens next! E

I hope to see them get together later on!

Sorry for the lack of reviews, I was on vaca (who). Haha! So much has happened! Wow, this is really good. I am quite enjoying this. Poor Anthony.

Now I'm stuck wondering who would be the uke... hm...

Very interesting. Anthony seems extremely cynical, but whatever

Aww.. I fell so sorry for Talon, even though what he did was wrong. Update soon this story is so wonderful.

It all makes sense now. I feel like Lance/Talon had been holding back up to this point and everything came out in this chapter. Ah, I love the angst and the drama. I think you nailed how both characters would react perfectly. More please please please.

AH! Anthony should talk to him. I really hope he does. Lance/Talon seems like he genuinely cares, and to give that up...well, that's not good.

Hope Anthony and Talon work things out.

-Alyssa

Mwaha. The torture begins "

Aw, poor Talon! *tear* I feel so bad for him, but I also feel bad for Anthony. I hope they work things out. ( Update soon, please.

- sadie

Poor Lance...Talon...he must feel horrible. I really wanna know what happens next, I mean..my Gods! I'm very curious. Wonderful chapter, and I hope you update soon.

Oh, noes. What's gonna happen?

Ahh, I want to know what happens so badly... *twitches* Your story is so exciting, I always look forward-and almost can't wait-to read the next chapter. Post it a.s.a.p., there's a lot of us waiting in suspense here! )

aw poor lance/talon i feel his pain but right now i love them both _ anthony's so pissed hehe i guess things never really got to me like that someone accused me of being a gay guy and two minutes and i just laughed had to get the whole chatroom to tell him i was female _ and i still talk to him but then i decorate all my stuff in smiley faces and peace signs PEOPLE THINK IMA HIPPY snd well thats just fine with me rofl good one i love seeing more up there _ this story is the best i had youdontknowmyname read it and when she first saw it she was like its twenty three chapeteers? i read a story she gave to me once and it was 29!with like 100 page chapeteers what does she expect?rofl aimlessly chatting now because i didnt get to get on yesterday even if this slash author updated! i was like O so you're gonna read it in front of my face and then not even tell me what happened *tear,tear* im about to get married and youre telling me to get a minivan how crueel rofl sorry got this commercial stuck in my head...im not even sure thats how it goes BUT whatever im supposed to be saying bye so au revoir hippy...or whatever _)/

oh, this is positively wonderful! I look forward to the coming chapter. You managed very well to make Talon sound as sorry as possible.

I love this story... everything about it. The way its in letter form, the slash, everything! Update soon.

Kat