|Reviews for Issues, Envelopes, & Homophobes
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 19 . 9/15/2014
Ooh, is Lance jealous?
I sure hope so :P
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 13 . 9/15/2014
I feel so bad for Anthony :((
The writing is amazing though!
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 12 . 9/15/2014
Ahahaha XD Anthony's trying to be a bad influence!
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 10 . 9/15/2014
Dude your writing is just so awesome! It's hilarious :D They are both pretty awesome characters :-)
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 9 . 9/15/2014
Hahaha anthony is so adorable! "I still hate you." I laughed at that. A lot :P
Lance is soo sweet
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 6 . 9/15/2014
I love this story sooo much already...The writing is amazing :-) it makes me laugh :D
| Jessie chapter 6 . 9/15/2014
I love it I love it I love it I love itttt
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 28 . 8/3/2014
All n' all, I love the idea of this story, but to be critical I think it could be better ... if it was more thought out!
I mean I get that the characters are 16, but seriously they were so immature -not sarcasm wise, I thought that was great, but in the whole 'traitor' or I'm gay, I don't care who knows, wait you have a problem with it? Screw you... kinda way...
I had a few problems with the story, in one part you had one of them use the word 'crush' that seems to girlish for a guy -gay or not- to use, I'd opt instead for just 'like'.
Then there was the journal bits... while I thought the idea of a continued plot -even as the characters were separated- was genius, when you added "quotes" you kind of ruined it...
Then there was the note passing, while I've been out of high school for like three years now, I'm pretty sure no one EVER signs a note they pass in class... that really bothered me for some reason!
I feel like I'm totally ranting, but in all honest I LOVED this! XD
I really thought you did a wonderful job, but I was thrown by some things... for instance their names... you have an upper-class wealthy rich boy named Talon? Yet, -with all his psychological issues- Anthony, named Anthony? Not saying that a person with psychological problems couldn't be named Anthony... I just think there names would work better reversed!
Then the whole 'Lance vs. Talon' thing... while the whole grand revel was pretty epic -I'll give you that- after thinking it over I don't really see the point! Why did Lance/Talon repeatedly discourage Anthony from making a move on, when he liked Anthony? O.o
In this situation, the best thing for Talon to do, while under the veil of 'Lance' would be to urge Anthony to pursue his feelings for Talon! While it would be considerably underhanded, and make for a much better reason to fight should the truth get out, it seems the most reasonable thing to do in that situation...
Maybe I'm just analyzing this too much, I don't know...
Regardless though, I really did enjoy reading this!
I thought it was incredibly original and well done!
Thanks for the great read,
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 23 . 8/3/2014
Omg- that has to be the coolest twist! XD
I totally didn't catch that...
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 3 . 8/2/2014
Okay... so this just did a penalty drop for me... seriously, suicide? .
I do have a few issues other than that... if the assignment was pen-pals -at the same school- then I think it would have been more interesting to require the students not to give the other their names. Plus, I don't see a class being pass or fail on the assumption of a pen-pal correspondence.
... just my thoughts, but I do like the overall idea! :3
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 2 . 8/2/2014
You speaka my language! XD
I'm loving this so far! :D
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Lmao Okay, so can I take a sec and just say I love this character! XD
*Anthoney Hearts4ever* :3
| Randomness-sama chapter 28 . 5/19/2014
man, that sounds worse than my life, I'm bi
| Randomness-sama chapter 10 . 5/19/2014
I don't study for tests but I'm the top student in my grade!
| Anita chapter 28 . 5/6/2014
I have never thought that letters between characters would be able to give life to a story , let alone a beautiful story like this one. You have seriously impressed me, I like you, consider me a new fan.