That is one pissed Anthony. Not that I'm not sympathetic with him or anything. I'd be pretty mad if someone was lying to me too.

But still...I feel bad for Lance/Talon (I liked the name Lance better, it suited him XD ) cause I can see where he's coming from too.

Anyway, hope they make up soon.

Cool chapter Talon had that coming. If anthony's stopped replying is it going to change to regular writing style? These letters can only get so much across. Anywho, this chapter is like so exciting I'll be waiting to read more so update soom!

This chapter was so sad! ;o; Anthony is so mad at him! _._

Ah fuck. I hate it when I cry. Tears sting. It hurts.

I understand Anthy's pain and anger, but why not give him a second chance, goddamit.

-Sugar

OMG, I knew it! I knew Lance was Talon!

...Okay, maybe I didn't really know for sure, but in the back of my head I vaguely wondered if he was. And turned out that suspicion was right. .

Fun chapter to read. Seriously.

Ok, so blondguy turned me on to this story and I admit its very good. But I have a question... Who the Heck is Lance Zederick? How does Talon/Lance get his letters if they're addressed to someone who isnt him? Ok, I'm done stressing and blondie say hey. Laterz

Yikes! Wanna read more!

UPATE, UPDATE. PLEASE. I like the name Talon a lot better then Lance. *random* I thought Talon might be Lance but I wasn't sure before. Anyways PLEASE update soon.

O_O; ... Wow. You amaze me. That chapter just... It crept up on me and jumped me before I even knew it was there. Amazing twist, really. One of those "I should've seen it coming but didn't" sort of things. Great stuff, really, I've got this story faved and anxiously await the next chapter. )

OH MY GOODNESS! You left it off at such a cliffhanger! I really hope you update soon...I want to see what's going on between these two.

-Alyssa

O, CLIFFHANGER. I can't wait to see where this story is going. And I was hoping so much that Lance and Talon would be the same person. And for writing this chapter, I love you. Like, A LOT.-LlaMa

**is shocked** I was right...for once. My Gods and Goddesses! This is just...wow..you absolutly must update this soon..I am dying here...**is dying**

wow i did not see that coming

OH...MY...GOD! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT! I AM SPEECHLESS! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER, I'M TOTALLY LOVING IT! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER! THIS REVIEW IS ALL CAPS... IT'S QUITE SCARY... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'LL DIE IF YOU DON'T!

- sadie

oh yay this has to be another one of my weird thoughts...nope! its there hehe no wonder he kept trying to tell him talon wasnt worh it O.O they sat right next to each other the whole time?how weird lol well...atleast he knows the person hes writing to is hot? rofl _ i didnt even know you updated until today...I FEEL LIKE SUCHA BAD PERSON ok not really lol schools starting soon _ hehe i soo cant wait _ *cough* nerd *cough* ok...not really _ i have two honors classes hehe THATS ALL! ...thank god they give them like a whole lot of work ata time and yeah the usual need to talk because i havent been ina chatroom all day _ thats my way of socialization so i'll leave you in peace -dramatic pause- FOR NOW! and'll be back for the next update hehe hopefully my comp will be back online then and i wont have to wait until ten at night just to read because O.O im not gonna be allowed to stay up that late soon _)/ my sister said i have to stop typing my essay so later!