Darn it! It did it again. Oh well. You'll just have to imagine them. One other thing...I can't believe I haven't done this yet...I mean really what was I thinking...

*adds to favs*

Ok now that I've recovered from the shock...it just now occured to me that Lance actually WASN'T jealous...so what was he then...?

Also FP did something wierd to my review for ch23 by erasing ALOT of H's...my actual response was this:

AH!

I KNEW IT I KNEW IT, IT WAS ONE OF MY STUPID GUESSES THAT I THOUGHT WAS STUPID BUT IN THE END IT WASN'T!

You've put me in highs spirits all day, friend. :) So Lance is a fake name, just for this letter exchange thing.

I really love this story! I think I've reviewed this before, but I want to again because I love the twist! I had figured out that Lance was gay/bi but I would have never guessed he was Talon! Good job on that _ This is a great story!

~Linux

Guh, huh, wha, what? *blinks and goes back to read other chapters again* ... Oh, my, GOD! Well, this sort of makes sense... in a mildly confusing way... Aww, poor Anthony. Not poor Lance, Talon, whatever... Okay, poor Talon. (just cuz I like him) Update NOW! Well, not now... BUT SOON!

AH! *is speechless* *has to go and reread the whole story again*

Oh. My. Fucking. God.

WHO THE HELL WAS EXPECTING /that/.

Dude. What an /unexpected/ twist. Talon Lance. You had my knickers twisted in a bunch. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOOD GOD.

All this time... dude. You so fucking rock.

Please, /please/ continue.

Woah. Woah, woah, woah, woah, woah. I can't say woah enough. I didn't see -that- coming. Woah. God, I love twists. Please continue.

GAH! $ *&%# &$ way to end a chapter! _ **breathes fire**

...on a happier note, I like. Quite a bit. This was a very pleasant surprise; it seems that once in a blue moon good stuff still crops up on ! You, m'good one, have just made my day.

First, I would like to say that what initially drew me to your story was the title. Love the title. **thumbs up sign**

Second, for this chapter: ...wow, I... wasn't expecting that. o.0 But I can see how it'd work! Just... Whe~! **bounces happily**

Tammy demands new chapters! Hop-to, wench! _

-sakurakumagorou/Tammy

PS-do you have a site/LJ/somewhere else you post stuff? 'cause Tammy would like, plz!

.God.

WHO WAS EXPECTING THAT?

I put down Lance in my hand as having an all mousy-like appearance...

I LOVE THIS. What's going to happen now?

This story rocks so much... (to be honest, I haven't been reading any of the other stories XD I need to go catch up!) Good job on this chapter!

I adore you. jeebuz, what an end to a chapter. I quite liked this one.

heh, you got called immoral. you fiend.

Brilliant chapter! I thought there was something suspisous between Talon and Lance, but not that they were the same person! Very well done chapter.

I KNEW IT!

OMG! That was such an unexpected twist! I never saw that one coming! You tricked me, you have to update asap, cause I really wanna know what happens! I officially LOVE this story, and you're such an awsome writer!

you are extremly sick did you know that! how can you even write about such a topic..immoral