Very, very, very good! I'm curious to see what goes down with Evelyn...write more soon!

-Alyssa

you wont do one at a time again well...because you love your reviewers and it gives them a reason not to have to go check on dinner that they didnt want to make or have right now in the first place oh one of my alltime favorite songs on this tape-yes i said tape if youre like other people and dont understand...hehe good thing about parents from the eighties-just ended so im going to use your review box to send culture club my love

man this is the life a good story culture club in the backround and EVERYTHING IS PERFECT well...almost anyway

I'm rather fond of the name Evelyn... probabaly because their was a very pretty girl I used to know with that name... *smiles and blushes*

In any case, it is nice Lance and Anthony are becoming closer. Caring for eachother... I can't help but feel it's dragging a little.

Idea: conversation between the two about whether lance has ever thought about being gay. I think that might be interesting.

Once again, I would have reviewed earlier but was being annoying... maybe it was my connection again. oh well.

The relationship is reasonable, I think... I know that feeling; as an author, you don't want to make things unrealistic just to please your readers. I think it is realistic, yeah...

More good chapters... I wish it would have a bit more variety, but other than that, it is good.

(smile) I think Lance is pushing Anthony's buttons, but he doesn't realize it. He's starting to care about Anthony and wants to know more about him, but Anthony doesn't trust him, and doesn't like people invading his space uninvitedly (is that a word?) so he ends up getting pissed off. He's also stuck in the mentality everyone is against him, and that's hard for him to get out of.

Tis my explanation, anyways. Good job again!

Youre right, Lance is pushing Anthony's buttons. Is Lance the one that told everyone Anthony's gay? It sounds like it by what he wrote in the first letter(in this chapter), but maybe it's just me. Who knows...well you do, but... anyway, good chapter!

See, I told you you wouldn't tell me who he got in a fight with! lol. It figures it'd be some stupid idiot jerks. Stupid idiots...-grumble- Anyway, good chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! And look, it's already here! -goes over to chapter 10-

Lance IS pushing his buttons, and they were getting along somewhat _ Woohoo Anthony got 91! XD Bet he's a pure genius underneath his exterior... I mean really beneath but still XD Yay for two updates!

it was lance's fault?GO LANCE! fight fight fight *chants throughout review* good chapeteers but i had to cut the last one short cause i absolutely love u2 even if theyre not cool and everyone thinks they sucks hehe im still listening to 80's music what do i care?rofl _ until next time my fellow author

I like this story! Their bickering is hilarious. I'm eager to see where it goes!

but i still hate you!rofl u2's on until next chapter...a couple minutes from now

Poor Anthony. I'd be pissed too if someone kept doing that to me...but, hey! I'm starting to like the way Lance thinks. ;)

Another awesome two chapters. I'll keep reading!

-Courtney

Oh, poor Anthony. It almost makes me wish it were in a regular format so I could find out more about him. But, I like this format. It's like when you have a real pen pal. All you know is what they're writing. Oh, does this mean there will be lots of drama? I lurve the drama. Drama makes the world go round. But I won't find out 'til later; I have to get off. But I plan on reading more soon, hopefully. Excellent work, by the way.

I love the format. Original and amusing. I love the stories where they start out hating each other. It makes things so much more amusing. Loverly work, dahlin'. I'm continuing on, now.

Just a short intro-thingy and I'm already drawn in. I already think I'm in love with Anthony. Anyways, I'm continuing on, so I can give you a decent review.

Thank you for the review on 'Deep Burning Feeling', by the way.