|Reviews for Eidolon|
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I love this bit
(fuck perfection, it's starting to get on my nerves)
(little shards of myself, digging into your skin. my brokeness is making you bleed)
(stop crying; you didn't do anything wrong. i'm the fuck-up)
(stop crying; i don't like this filthy concience of guilt that's grown too fond of raping me)
(and life likes to play with you when it gets bored of massacre, but it's far too big for us to even try to get mad at)
(would you let me fall into you and let me stay until morning stops coming?)
(because i'm beginning to wish for things that don't quite exist, and it's hurting both of us)
Though I'm not quite sure why each new line was in (brackets).
This was a beautiful piece though. The emotion is portrayed really well.
| Fate Defied chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
really good. liked the part where you said fuck perfection and that i'm the fuck-up. cuz that's what i am. could be a really good song. k/wshadowofyou