Reviews for Looking
silentscreamer07 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
HEY ITNEY SISTER! hehe ... i think its officail now...almost everyone has a poem that has somethin to do with a mirror..and looking at their reflection, and how they dont like it.. but other then that..i still thought it was pretty good...i love the whole mirror concept! *kw*britney
Forgotten Shadow chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
That was realy good! i liked the 1rst 4 lines in particualr. ~kw~
Natasha chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Wow! This one really kinda hits close to home...I actually teared up while reading- so many times have I actually felt like this girl in your poem. Awesome work Whit- keep it up!
aggrievedly maladroit chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
hiya! i agree w/ you, this is one of ur best poems. i liked it a lot. it flowed really good, and you did (as always) a great job getting your emotionsmessage across. good imagery, great subject, this was just overall a great poem! o and i didnt eat pizza btw, i found we have chicken for sandwiches, much much tastier-lol. :D:D well keep up the good work and chao~

steph the great
LoveAlways05 chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Here i go again reviewing myself... well to me i think this is one of my best poems but its not for me to judge so you guys tell me what you really think about this, buh-byes
Autumn-Flowers chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
It's emotiona. Powerful. up the good writing. I hope the next one is happier but be true to yourself. It shows through your poetry.