Reviews for Fuck You!
FatedDarkness chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
*giggles* Sounds like what I'd like to say to me ex. Oh and...SPELLING! It's whore, not hoar. Right?
Iren chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Very angry... I loved it! xD /Irene
Deluded chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
It was so good, never mind the swearing- the rhyme scheme, the rhythm, the pacing of it all. The progression from Despair to Anger to Envy (Rampancy, anyone?).Until the last line! The last line! It spoiled the beat of the whole piece! Simply too many syllables! I cannot get over the last line; it stands out and ruins an otherwise good poem.
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I actually think the swearing spoils it, it brings the tone of what would otherwise be a very good poem down a bit.

Apart from that, it's a good, angry poem.

Matt
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
very raw and strong. i really like this )
TookyToucan chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
DANG THAT WAS ANGRY! hehehehe, good (angry) job!
Wondering Wolf chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
For some reason I just want to laugh :P thank you for the reviews, I'm sorry this is a first, I'll send more as I can!
gpshaw chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
A lot of emtion in those few lines sorry about whatever happened life sucks sometimes don't it?
Dasuberkinder chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
nice message but one nitpick its spelled Whore*. Hoar is a type of frost