Reviews for Pathetic
sarani-silver chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
i'm guna assume u weren't going for the feel good typ of poem but it was still good just reather sad
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
"As if..." conveys such an uncertainty, a theme prevalent in many of your poems. You are often intensely self-critical and rarely satisfied, or at least that is so in the poems and the speaker.