Reviews for The FortyFour
henbee chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
So I'm stalking your author profile and I'm glad I have. This, my dear, is comic genius in it's mere simplicity.

Long story short; this was awesome.
InsaneOleander chapter 4 . 9/22/2006
haha, these stories are really cute. :D

asdj; the descriptions of the apples in this one were all too relatable for me. Too often have I eaten a disgustingly squishy plum or nectarine. some fruits are just not worth eating if they do not have the right amount of crisp to them.
Lady Croft chapter 4 . 9/5/2005
Great... Now Im hungry.

Short and very sweet (unlike the apple, lol) Goes to show you dont need to write tons and tons in a chapter to get your point across. Well done.
ASh chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
LOL! You were so good at describing stuff there. I Want to eat an apple now.
Lady Croft chapter 3 . 8/11/2005
Ah, diplomacy. It always works best.

I am the one with the car in my group of friends but I never fall for those, lol. Mostly because my friends arent that cunning. "Hey! Let's go out! Like now!"

"Fuck that, Im not going anywhere. Walk, fatty."

"YOU walk!"

"Im the one with the car. I dont have to walk."

That's usually how it goes... Sad, isnt it?

Well keep updating! I love these little adventures and musings. Take care! And good luck in school :)
Lizzy Come Lately chapter 2 . 8/7/2005
That place sounds like it was pretty crappy. o.o Wonder what it looks like now...Anywho, reading true stories is always cool, and this is a good one! Keep going with it, I want to see what , MisatoAeris
Lady Croft chapter 2 . 8/5/2005
I cant help but root for the characters in this story. So relatable. Im headed to college in september.. Im in Residence, but that in itself has its own set of problems. I've been writing a fic on this topic as well, only about Rez life and mostly fiction. Can't wait to read more of this. I am eagerly awaiting it!
That Darn Kat chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
OMG...SO FUNNY! XD There arn't very many funny fics anymore on FP. You must write more!