Reviews for Death counts down
Aithene chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Wow. this is dark. A good dark. Not the stereotypical cry and kill myself pathethic dark. And we're similar. Emo kids are cool! :] thanks for reviewing my story.
Purpurn Jellybean chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I like this poem. It's dark, but I have many friends who OD all the time and end up in the hospital more than 3 times a week, so I relate to this easily. Yes, you were correct about my poem. It was about a girl who became obsessed over a movie star/actor/singer. And guess what? I love the fact that you love Something Corporate. I saw it on your profile and I almost flipped out. I love them! Great poem. I hope to read more from you.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
I think going to zero would have made the ending more final, but otherwise a great piece, especially with the use of italics. Very powerful.