Its cute i like it. Keep them coming. But maybe you should think of a different title or mention Thirteen. But i like it. R/R my stories if ya like-Shasta

wow! it has a great rhythm & flow and its something a lot of people can relate to- i hope you can figure things out with your friends. ~chey

...i loved the rhythem...and the idea...soo much! i think the only thing that i would change...is the last line...but...it's the author's call...and i think your poem is fantastic! keep writing!