Reviews for Wilting Black Rose
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Aw...this is one of the poems I can actually relate to...amazing job on it, too...

-freak from the corner
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Oh, I really really like this. The way the second verse is almost like a distorted echo of the first verse works really well. I wish I could hear it to music. The rhyming seemed very natural, which is a good thing. So good job.
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Wow. that's amazing... truly amazing, it's beautiful... although I'm not too sure about the swearing, it does give more of an angry feel, more impatient, which ties in with the next line. I wish someone I knew would listen to this (thank you for putting it in such eloquent words) it's beautiful
Greg M. Schumaker chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Very good, it's sweet.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
it was good and i'm sure heartfelt but at one point i was wondering whether you might be talking to my therapist or as i so lovingly call, my shrink! lol... sorry it had a nice flow to it...
Shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
It is a rather lovely poem/song...not in the happy's fucking good and u know it. Sorry I can't help u like some people...wish i knew bout some of the things u were going thru...and sorry if i seem angry...
Noir Fleurir chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
awesome. Very enjoyable to read i like it keep it up:)
Endowment's Seraph chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
that's so beautiful. touching. it's good you have someone and it's always good to be yourself. nothing hurts more then being lost. loneliness makes us stronger, it makes us appreciate the people we have in our lives, makes us learn how trully blessed we are to have friends, family, anyone who cares for you. *hug*~Mel
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
It's nice to have you back! I was hoping you would come around someday. Your talent is needed around here. But anyway, this is a great song and I can see the person who you wrote it for enjoyed it as well. Keep on writing!
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
he he yay! I feel special...